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Please Stop Starting Your Sentences with “However” (except in certain cases)
“In the 1960s, the California State Water Project, conceived and built during the administration of Governor Edmund G. ‘Pat’ Brown, was designed to guarantee adequate water for the rapidly growing Southland well into the twenty-first century. However, since the California Aqueduct carried more water than Los Angeles Metropolitan Water District (Met) customers could use in…